Vad tycker ni om mina bröllopslöften till min blivande?

De är på engelska då detta är mitt modersmål och det känns mest naturligt för mig:

  
You are my inspiration and my soul's fire.
You bring magic to my life.
You put a smile on my face and you give me your love everyday.
You provide a safe place for me, unlike I've ever known.
You free me to go after my dreams.
You look at me and my hole body wants to dance
You are my greatest love and you have been by my side for all my good and bad  moments for 9 years.

What can I say to you that I haven’t already said,
What can I give you that I haven’t already given,
Is there anything of me that isn’t yours already,
My body, my mind, my heart, even my soul,
Everything that is me belonged to you long before this,
And it shall be yours long after this,
I will follow you anywhere and everywhere you lead,
Hand in hand and heart in heart.
Today and all of our tomorrows I will love you <3

För långt???